The whole...rut...scene? (chapters. plural...)

Zelynda September 17, 2025 11:56 am

Sooo...I knew it was gonna be bad, and I've read similar scenes in other Omegaverse stories where the alpha/top says scary things like "I WANT TO PUT MY ENTIRE SELF INSIDE OF YOU" or "YOU'RE MINE" but...Ash...

The part where Karlyle was flat out begging him and saying the words "no" and "stop" and Ash's reaction was--and gleefully, too--"TOO BAD, you're just gonna have to TAKE it!"

I would've liked it a lot better if he did the "lose your mind so much you can't speak at all" deal...

Take it? TAKE IT. I'm sorry, that's what a rapist says.

At that point, I just couldn't like their relationship, or him, anymore, and had to stop reading. I like Omegaverse, I like my wild feral boys who can sometimes get pregnant, but "take it" as the response to "no stop" is over every line I have. At that point, my eyes would've gone absolutely dead cold with fear and betrayal, and the SECOND I could get loose, I would. I would run into the first lockable room and go home without my clothes and phone if I had to. Barefoot. Out the window with tied-together sheets like in the movies. I'm not opening the door to him in that state, after he says "Too bad, you'll just have to take it!"

"I'm sorry, but I can't just...un-knot, at will!" or "I know, baby, but it'll be over soon" or even just glowing wolf eyes and a bite would've been more acceptable.

It's really a shame, because Ash, for the longest time, seemed like the type who seemed all charming because he actually WAS.

But if drunk words are sober thoughts........what about rut words?
At that point I would've wondered if I'd actually fallen in love with a fictional character who never existed.

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