Well this was pretty cute, buuuut the MC and his found family carried it tbh. The ML starts off as a pos and doesn’t really have any character development so he stays a pos….
I originally started this after of seeing images of the baby, but istg they rush literally everything! Like why is it necessary that the mpreg arc be just 2 chapters?! And not only is the kid only in the last few chapters, but the pregnancy lasted 3 months and the kid also skips infancy and ages quickly??! I will never understand the trope of rushing the baby’s growth. Like it’s not even just a timeskip, he literally walks and talks at 3 months. Whyyyyy
Gotta say, the vast vast majority of the story is just the ML being a freeloading bitch. They had him give a warm smile a couple times at the very end, so now he’s suddenly a green flag ig? He gets too easily bored with novelty and seems way too noncommittal for me to like him. Could totally imagine him peacing out after trying out family life for a bit.（￣へ￣）
Well this was pretty cute, buuuut the MC and his found family carried it tbh. The ML starts off as a pos and doesn’t really have any character development so he stays a pos….
I originally started this after of seeing images of the baby, but istg they rush literally everything! Like why is it necessary that the mpreg arc be just 2 chapters?! And not only is the kid only in the last few chapters, but the pregnancy lasted 3 months and the kid also skips infancy and ages quickly??! I will never understand the trope of rushing the baby’s growth. Like it’s not even just a timeskip, he literally walks and talks at 3 months. Whyyyyy
Gotta say, the vast vast majority of the story is just the ML being a freeloading bitch. They had him give a warm smile a couple times at the very end, so now he’s suddenly a green flag ig? He gets too easily bored with novelty and seems way too noncommittal for me to like him. Could totally imagine him peacing out after trying out family life for a bit.（￣へ￣）