honeymoon chapter/pirate issue was not really needed. Feels more like filler so author can figure out how to end it whit more chapters. This would have been done whitin 28 chapters. Crazy mother who lies to daughter who broke down etc is still on the loose and ex fiance is sure to reapear. Brother was way too innocent in his thinking. Common hes a knight !
honeymoon chapter/pirate issue was not really needed.
Feels more like filler so author can figure out how to end it whit more chapters. This would have been done whitin 28 chapters. Crazy mother who lies to daughter who broke down etc is still on the loose and ex fiance is sure to reapear. Brother was way too innocent in his thinking. Common hes a knight !