this reads like its written by a teenager 😭 the characters are just so one dimensional ...

chuu~ <3 September 20, 2025 6:53 am

this reads like its written by a teenager the characters are just so one dimensional and the dialogue is stiff and awkward.. like after healing him she fr said “I have healed him”, okay climax who??!? but the art is pretty so i kept reading it

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