Thoughts and prayers

All the characters do what what the writers want them to do as they throw mountains of information at the reader, for a story that has so much backstreet and self monologue all the characters felt so blank, as if being solely driven by the writer. The plot is innovative in a way but is drowned by the lack of cohérence. The way some 9f the characters are portrayed are so haphazard ngl.....the only character that I feel was well done is the princess's Nanny. Loved that the princess was smart but it didn't feel genuine like if the writer didn't know how to write a strong and scheming woman while also balancing that she is kind and broken......I don't know how to explain it but most of the characters felt so one tracked......also didn't like how the only reason the Duke payed attention to her was because she didn't want him now and she was avoiding him, (yes I know he thought she knew his secrete but again THAT SHOULDNT HAVE BEEN A THOUGHT, the writer keep such a hold on the characters tat its hard to actually invest yourself in them and see them as interesting) also the ending was trash felt so incomplete, even just 5 more panels would have surficed to tie up the story but it felt so abrupt.....nothing lead up to it....nothing eluded to the ending. Anygays thats my thoughts and yes I read the whole thing....sadly.....the art saved it trendously ngl if this was a book god help us all