Okay, im gonna have to be honest. This Ending was genuinely not it, this story had such gr...

Pew September 21, 2025 4:49 pm

Okay, im gonna have to be honest. This Ending was genuinely not it, this story had such great potential, especially in the beginning. But later on, it felt one sided? Everything was suddenly rushed, and it just did not hit home.

Don’t get me wrong, i loved reading this. Its just a shame, that it was brushed under the rug. Would’ve loved if the story was a little longer, explained more of the drama and all over. There’s still a lot to be questioned.


At last they’re happy.
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Responses
    fruitless September 21, 2025 5:04 pm

    I agree, though I think it’s nice to have a story once in a while without angst.

    Pew September 21, 2025 6:40 pm
    I agree, though I think it’s nice to have a story once in a while without angst. fruitless

    Yes, i agree 100%, or abusive arcs or something. They’re literally not needed. Its just that it felt rushed overall. We could’ve had more fluff more lore

    fruitless September 21, 2025 6:45 pm
    Yes, i agree 100%, or abusive arcs or something. They’re literally not needed. Its just that it felt rushed overall. We could’ve had more fluff more lore Pew

    Yeah I agree. Overall, at least it was an easy read. Hopefully we get some side stories