I got only a couple panels into chapter 1 and I can already tell this is gonna be shit, also the other comments saying that it is, tells me I was right. This is NOT how you write a story, you've thrown us into a plot that we don't understand, and we don't know. Sometimes authors can get away with this, and it actually makes the story better, but this was horribly executed, and I hope the author decides to actually learn how to correctly write, instead of spinning their thumbs around, making bullshit.
I got only a couple panels into chapter 1 and I can already tell this is gonna be shit, also the other comments saying that it is, tells me I was right. This is NOT how you write a story, you've thrown us into a plot that we don't understand, and we don't know. Sometimes authors can get away with this, and it actually makes the story better, but this was horribly executed, and I hope the author decides to actually learn how to correctly write, instead of spinning their thumbs around, making bullshit.