This is an okay read so far i guess, there were many parts where it was kinda cliché and honestly confusing like the part where jing and the 2 other twinks were hidding and doing their own stuff then zuosen and the others randomly appeared and jing forgave zuosen, but i could kinda get past that, but then now they fuck every few chapters and even became the indirect reason the gang members died in the ship (because rhey were being too lovey dovey to notice that they werent the only assasins in the ship), also the part where zuosen just switches up from majorly obssesive to whatever he is rn, idk if its just me but i kinda thought it was sudden, there wasn't really a redemption arc so maybe thats why?
This is an okay read so far i guess, there were many parts where it was kinda cliché and honestly confusing like the part where jing and the 2 other twinks were hidding and doing their own stuff then zuosen and the others randomly appeared and jing forgave zuosen, but i could kinda get past that, but then now they fuck every few chapters and even became the indirect reason the gang members died in the ship (because rhey were being too lovey dovey to notice that they werent the only assasins in the ship), also the part where zuosen just switches up from majorly obssesive to whatever he is rn, idk if its just me but i kinda thought it was sudden, there wasn't really a redemption arc so maybe thats why?