hmm

Spitfire September 22, 2025 11:57 pm

thats why you oughta make your ml redemption arc be in the present times and make him suffer the consequences of his actions instead of 10 chapters of abusive childhood flashback. it is less impactful that way, of course hes still gonna act like an asshole hes not brought down low enough

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    1800GAYTOPS September 22, 2025 11:58 pm

    Thank you!

    Spitfire September 23, 2025 12:01 am

    i think a good example of trying this trope is "exotic love"