I see the vision, but it's still a bit blurry and muddy

FuckedMyWayUpToTheTop September 23, 2025 1:09 am

So basically, a recessive alpha wants to be loved for who he is, not what he does and has attachment issues because of it; a dominant alpha wants to be loved for who he is, not the expectations projected onto him (by Dylan), so he kinda has attachment issues, too. I say they match their (mental) freak.

The flashbacks got annoying at times, but they fill in the story and create a red string for readers to follow the evolution of their relationship, so whatever, I see the purpose.

The sex scenes are surprisingly sterile, I don't feel much of the passion during sex, which both of them display otherwise in their intense interactions. I guess the art style is partially to blame. Sometimes, the anatomy is wonky af, too.

This could've been great, actually. The dialogue was on point, although a bit dragged at times. They main characters are pretty, especially Colton, but the eroticism and intensity wasn't there in their physical /sexual interactions. What a shame.

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