It’s not bad but unfortunately, it feels all over the place. It feels as if unfortunately, it feels all over the place. It feels as if multiple chapters are missing or something because it’s jumping from one thing to the next without any clear explanation of what happened before that or how we even got to this point. Like when he first got to the village we never saw him speak to anyone so I was highly confused on how he even learned about the little girl being sick. It feels like a lot of holes in the plot to be honest.
It’s not bad but unfortunately, it feels all over the place. It feels as if unfortunately, it feels all over the place. It feels as if multiple chapters are missing or something because it’s jumping from one thing to the next without any clear explanation of what happened before that or how we even got to this point. Like when he first got to the village we never saw him speak to anyone so I was highly confused on how he even learned about the little girl being sick. It feels like a lot of holes in the plot to be honest.