Progression was there, but the ending was too rushed. :<< He didn't even have a redemption arc; it was starting, but it got cut off way too fast. MC meeting the puppy, as well as the little girl telling the MC that she was told to have lots of fun with them, really made my heart drop toward the "what could have been."
Progression was there, but the ending was too rushed. :<< He didn't even have a redemption arc; it was starting, but it got cut off way too fast.
MC meeting the puppy, as well as the little girl telling the MC that she was told to have lots of fun with them, really made my heart drop toward the "what could have been."