Ok welp, that’s it for me

Nikki September 24, 2025 11:12 pm

All that drama and growth, everyone is finally on the same page annnnndd… nothing?? They express regret and she doesn’t forgive them and now 7 years pasted? Yeah no. That’s just stupid I can’t. There are two plots in this story and ruined both off them for me.

That they would spend 7 years refusing to further discuss their issues is not something I can take more of after everything. What was even the point of showing us the family growing closer??

The only other plot is the sister! Who is also just gone for 7 YEARS? And I’m guessing she is coming back and the family will still not be communicating properly thus giving her openings. Nope, I can’t do it. Loved the story up to this but good luck y’all! I hope you enjoy it even if I can’t. I’ll miss the art and blinding magic

Responses
    Leej10100 September 25, 2025 7:27 am

    Same, it was all too much for me, everything feels rushed. Their attempt at making her cool after the timeskip only lasted the first chapter and afterwards things just got awkward and confusing. It felt like a completely different story with the same characters. And the brother and red head fighting over her was such a headache. I know it was supposed to show how much they love and adore her but it just didn't work for me. So sad cause I was loving this story but I can't follow the plot anymore.

    Nikki September 25, 2025 7:52 am
    Same, it was all too much for me, everything feels rushed. Their attempt at making her cool after the timeskip only lasted the first chapter and afterwards things just got awkward and confusing. It felt like a ... Leej10100

    Agreed. She looks amazing as an adult and love seeing use her power. For a second it almost worked but the skip is just too awkward.
    It makes everything from above that time seem pointless.