I was itching to reread a few stories I liked and decided to reread this one and mannnn I forgot how quick paced it is and how not very flushed out other characters in this story are, with the only significant ones outside of the FL and ML being Hangyeol and Woojin’s mum, and even those are hardly anything at all… no side stories either, barely an acknowledgment of the child that was born… It’s still a cute story that grasps onto the biggest obstacles to make it interesting, but it would’ve been so much better if it was able to be stretched out longer to include more slice-of-life cute moments and flesh out at least Seyun’s two closest friends and more of Hangyeol and Woojin’s mum. And considering they use Seyun’s dad as a plot device to push the marriage, a genuine heartfelt and fleshed out moment between Seyun and her dad would have been very good. Needless to say, there’s a lot lacking with this story, but for as short as it is, it’s a decent quick read. That being said… that annoying sunbae that kept tormenting seyun… hehe… definitely needs to be the bottom in a BL spinoff where he gets put in his place… hehe… or even with Hangyeol, who can be a genuinely kind ML but scary in a quiet kind of way when he’s mad, and not afraid to throw hands when it matters… oh man the ideas flowing into my head and how that kind of story could progress… hehe… I know it will never happen but I can imagine it
I was itching to reread a few stories I liked and decided to reread this one and mannnn I forgot how quick paced it is and how not very flushed out other characters in this story are, with the only significant ones outside of the FL and ML being Hangyeol and Woojin’s mum, and even those are hardly anything at all… no side stories either, barely an acknowledgment of the child that was born… It’s still a cute story that grasps onto the biggest obstacles to make it interesting, but it would’ve been so much better if it was able to be stretched out longer to include more slice-of-life cute moments and flesh out at least Seyun’s two closest friends and more of Hangyeol and Woojin’s mum. And considering they use Seyun’s dad as a plot device to push the marriage, a genuine heartfelt and fleshed out moment between Seyun and her dad would have been very good. Needless to say, there’s a lot lacking with this story, but for as short as it is, it’s a decent quick read. That being said… that annoying sunbae that kept tormenting seyun… hehe… definitely needs to be the bottom in a BL spinoff where he gets put in his place… hehe… or even with Hangyeol, who can be a genuinely kind ML but scary in a quiet kind of way when he’s mad, and not afraid to throw hands when it matters… oh man the ideas flowing into my head and how that kind of story could progress… hehe… I know it will never happen but I can imagine it