...may not read far enough to see how good this is. I find that the pacing of the story evolves as "the outsider's" (the one possessing Eris) state of mind deteriorates. The beginning makes you feel like it's dragging because the outsider has just about given up. As she sees a possibility to escape, the pace picks up. And continues as she becomes more desperate. I love how it ended. If you stick with it, you can really appreciate & enjoy it, as I have.
...may not read far enough to see how good this is.
I find that the pacing of the story evolves as "the outsider's" (the one possessing Eris) state of mind deteriorates. The beginning makes you feel like it's dragging because the outsider has just about given up. As she sees a possibility to escape, the pace picks up. And continues as she becomes more desperate.
I love how it ended.
If you stick with it, you can really appreciate & enjoy it, as I have.