This has got to be the hardest read I’ve had in months. I don’t know if it’s because of the MTL, but the dialogue and characters felt like they were all written by some teenager trying to write an interesting narrative. The attempts at humor fell flat on its ass and instead of chuckling at the god awful interactions, I cried instead, because of how bad it was. My skin shriveled each time the two uttered a sentence, and I felt like someone had taken the original BL and translated it with their own quirky spin to it. To say the least, I’ve been tortured. Though, the sex therapy scene was decent I guess?? Whoever had picked up the pen to write this should be forced to contemplate about this abomination though
I TAKE BACK EVERYTHING I SAID. PLEASE READ THE OTHER VERSION WITH BETTER TRANSLATIONS. The TML doesn’t do this BL justice, and it actually has a nice message. Please do not read this badly translated version though!
This has got to be the hardest read I’ve had in months. I don’t know if it’s because of the MTL, but the dialogue and characters felt like they were all written by some teenager trying to write an interesting narrative. The attempts at humor fell flat on its ass and instead of chuckling at the god awful interactions, I cried instead, because of how bad it was. My skin shriveled each time the two uttered a sentence, and I felt like someone had taken the original BL and translated it with their own quirky spin to it.
To say the least, I’ve been tortured. Though, the sex therapy scene was decent I guess?? Whoever had picked up the pen to write this should be forced to contemplate about this abomination though