Ngl yall a lil too hungry for dick. I’m so glad the author is actually giving their characters time in developing their relationship, but here y’all are rushing to look for a scene like the rapture believers rushing to look for the pearly white gates.. (edit) might I add that I am OBVIOUSLY aware of how chapter 22 ended. And so I also understand why people are a lil shocked with how chapter 23 ended up going—BUT my point still stands, the transitioning from chap.22 to chap.23 is the only issue I see here, from the comment I saw regarding revisions for chap.22, I hope the author still sticks to that scene ending at that, just with a better ending.
Ngl yall a lil too hungry for dick. I’m so glad the author is actually giving their characters time in developing their relationship, but here y’all are rushing to look for a scene like the rapture believers rushing to look for the pearly white gates.. (edit) might I add that I am OBVIOUSLY aware of how chapter 22 ended. And so I also understand why people are a lil shocked with how chapter 23 ended up going—BUT my point still stands, the transitioning from chap.22 to chap.23 is the only issue I see here, from the comment I saw regarding revisions for chap.22, I hope the author still sticks to that scene ending at that, just with a better ending.