Oh my god they were right its so corny i feel like i cant continue reading this Maybe the...

Euna (I make long ass essays) September 28, 2025 8:14 pm

Oh my god they were right its so corny i feel like i cant continue reading this
Maybe the author is a beginner idk but it just doesnt sit right with me bro, the whole cheating thing, ik they're not together but it is HEAVILY implied and he's selfish for leading her on, i know its easier said than done but he's hurting all parties by proceeding with this relationship. False promises, and worse, he already MET the parents oh my god, seriously, the people know too

And to add on the cringe, there *was* some scenes I cringed a lil but shrugged it off but the whole fight in the locker room thing over a twink sent me LMAO, who pulls a punch over something like that, he only told him to stop why is he so pressed like how'd it escalate so bad (actually the point where I stopped)

Also another thing i just wanted to point out, how is the image search straight up porn bro twink isnt immediately a sexual thing, its a body type but anyways

That's just my two cents, I'll give it the benefit of the doubt maybe, just maybe the author will be able to smooth over the plot so, goodluck i guess?

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