Terrible pacing

Peak September 29, 2025 9:11 am

How can you expect an audience to care about the second couple when you introduce them at the peak of the main couples conflict?

I was actually fine with it for chapter 40 because introducing them also showed the ML alpha officially ending things with the omega, so there was progress on the main couples plot. But you can't have an audience wait another week just to have the next chapter focus mainly on that second couple and worst yet, leave us on a cliff hanger for the main couples story and showed absolutely no progress towards their plot.

Still have interest in this manga but as it stands, the tension between the main couple is just way too high to start shifting focus on people that feel absolutely irrelevant right now.

Responses
    naonao October 2, 2025 12:17 pm

    Its not that serious bro

    DarkDruidCraft October 2, 2025 2:35 pm
    Its not that serious bro naonao

    They’re not making it “that serious.” They’re stating an opinion as a reader. Which a chunk of us agree with. It is sloppy plot work.

    Bun Bun October 2, 2025 7:10 pm
    Its not that serious bro naonao

    It is because nb cares about them atm and their storyline is getting in the way. Don’t dismiss other people’s opinion because you simply don’t care

    Ace October 2, 2025 8:21 pm
    Its not that serious bro naonao

    And yet you're stupid enough to comment. Your kind is the most hated people. Having the audacity to yap stupid shit like "itsss not sewwiussss bwoooo" coz you lack any kind of comprehension or reading skills. The op is giving their time to read something, assess it and explain things and give their opinion. It is indeed serious for them. You're the clueless one here. Stupid mf

    Bun Bun October 2, 2025 10:00 pm
    And yet you're stupid enough to comment. Your kind is the most hated people. Having the audacity to yap stupid shit like "itsss not sewwiussss bwoooo" coz you lack any kind of comprehension or reading skills. ... Ace

    I’m so happy this wasn’t towards me because damn

    Peak October 3, 2025 2:37 pm
    Its not that serious bro naonao

    I know your kind, you read because there's pictures and that's okay. Don't let the big 5+ letter words hurt your brain and just ignore my comment boo