After letting it marnate for years. I finaly read it all. I love both MLs. However, they shouldn't have given so much depth to sir knight in earlier chaps. Way to break the heart seriously. Overall it was good. However it just left a bitter taste too. I like erez too. I wish the mc didn't have a ML at this point and all of them stayed friends. The hate i felt for the father. I couldn't like him till the end but it was more of a neutral feeling. Like i felt nothing for him at the last. It was a great story but i feel something is missing. I can't pinpoint it.
After letting it marnate for years. I finaly read it all.
I love both MLs.
However, they shouldn't have given so much depth to sir knight in earlier chaps. Way to break the heart seriously.
Overall it was good. However it just left a bitter taste too. I like erez too. I wish the mc didn't have a ML at this point and all of them stayed friends.
The hate i felt for the father. I couldn't like him till the end but it was more of a neutral feeling. Like i felt nothing for him at the last.
It was a great story but i feel something is missing. I can't pinpoint it.