Bruh we kinda lost the strength of the plot in the middle. The ml isn't even a problem tbh it was the mc becoming op all of a sudden LOLLL. Fym you became powerful af after the ogfl gave you some heirloom when she doesnt even know tf is actually happening. How convenient lolol. The conclusion of the plot was weak
Its good for a one time read. The mls were hot. I like Dan but Eugene was a better ml tbh. Or even Kain. Augh.
Bruh we kinda lost the strength of the plot in the middle. The ml isn't even a problem tbh it was the mc becoming op all of a sudden LOLLL. Fym you became powerful af after the ogfl gave you some heirloom when she doesnt even know tf is actually happening. How convenient lolol. The conclusion of the plot was weak
Its good for a one time read. The mls were hot. I like Dan but Eugene was a better ml tbh. Or even Kain. Augh.