It’s more of a ‘love at 1st sight’, well not first sight, but it’s practically instant.
Don’t know if they are trying to be swift? But I like the falling in love part, but I guess since he’s part dragon and animals have a pretty good judge of character… but she falls because they had sex?
And she’s wanted to become a commoner, but because she met the king, she’s fine with being a noble?
There’s no time for the reader to love either character, we barely got any context for either. And as much as he is my type, (dragon, dark hair) I can’t say if I like him or not, he’s very pushy, while she’s constantly undecided.(●￣(ｴ)￣●)
It’s not bad, but it’s not good either.
I can’t get into the story if I can’t relate or understand the characters.
It’s more of a ‘love at 1st sight’, well not first sight, but it’s practically instant.
Don’t know if they are trying to be swift? But I like the falling in love part, but I guess since he’s part dragon and animals have a pretty good judge of character… but she falls because they had sex?
And she’s wanted to become a commoner, but because she met the king, she’s fine with being a noble?
There’s no time for the reader to love either character, we barely got any context for either. And as much as he is my type, (dragon, dark hair) I can’t say if I like him or not, he’s very pushy, while she’s constantly undecided.(●￣(ｴ)￣●)
It’s not bad, but it’s not good either.
I can’t get into the story if I can’t relate or understand the characters.