pretty good. mc reminds me of the mc from out (also abt fighting/delinquents) looks wise. ...

applecrisp September 30, 2025 12:54 pm

pretty good. mc reminds me of the mc from out (also abt fighting/delinquents) looks wise.

art is peak, especially for more intense/emotional scenes

it's hinting at romance between mc & yena, but personally i would want to see her with the tall guy instead. (yknow, just seems more interesting)

if they do go the romance route, i hope they develop her more as a character. to me, she only stands out since she's not your typical fl, design and personality wise. but so far, she's kinda like... in the background

anyway, i have high hopes!!

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    applecrisp September 30, 2025 12:58 pm

    also, yena just seems better as a friend rather than a love interest. i am on chapter 40 something but i just don't see the chemistry between them