(chapter 1) ok but can I just say them being 5 is literally what reminds me that this is just a fantasy story, like idk about other but I have a cousin who's 5 and all she cares about is where her toys are as she struggles to hold a broom. So it's hard to believe a 5 year old could have this much thought process and seem mature for their age lol, this is just me tho nothing about the characters or how they're written.
Also clarifying I mean the first few pages before she grew up, not the one's where she had already come back
(chapter 1) ok but can I just say them being 5 is literally what reminds me that this is just a fantasy story, like idk about other but I have a cousin who's 5 and all she cares about is where her toys are as she struggles to hold a broom. So it's hard to believe a 5 year old could have this much thought process and seem mature for their age lol, this is just me tho nothing about the characters or how they're written.
Also clarifying I mean the first few pages before she grew up, not the one's where she had already come back