So Bland

Mycatsaretoofat October 2, 2025 5:43 pm

Honestly, it's not terrible and the action is good, there's just not much to it? Like, there's no struggle, no real conflict that needs to get resolved. There is a criminally underlooked aspect of this story which is the intelligent monsters and associated item text, like what do you mean the gods kicked out the druid for having domination abilities????? Why is he so not curious about any of it?

Responses
    Skuterlu November 14, 2025 3:05 pm

    Right he is like yeah I'mma join the association, arrest criminals and closed all gates and that's it. Like he barely even talk about the people who killed him like dude where are they, are you gonna take revenge? What do you mean close all gates? You are not trying to find out why the gates are there to begin with where they come from or anything. So how you will close all of them and know that new ones won't come? Author is trying to make him powerful and cool but is forgetting some crucial things