There is still something missing

Star**** October 3, 2025 4:15 pm

When I read this first I thought there is a lot missing no real climax. But after reading it again it kind of changed for me. It still feels like they needed more chapters to make it complete and without the extras is would be crazy unfinished but the last chapter make me think "I wish I had that" not the strange violent part but this feeling if coming home an being accepted even with the very strange parts I don't understand myself.
That's no feeling I would have expected from a story like this.

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