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Exactly. He could have just left goging sunfish out of nowhere instead of that grape plot. Goging sunfish could have just felt abandoned and angry and sad and maybe that could have made a better impact/plot device to the story. The grape was so unwanted. I stopped reading when I saw that then skipped a few chapters to see wut happened nxt.
This is really a fine story overall, funny and cute and smexy. So i cannot for the lif of me understand WHY THERE WAS GRAPE ON THAT ONE CHAPTER, that also does not change the plot one bit, as the mc clearly just "forgets" about it.