The art is nice and I'm enjoying the story okay but the pacing and structuring is confusin...

Emi·_·★ October 3, 2025 11:52 pm

The art is nice and I'm enjoying the story okay but the pacing and structuring is confusing, and the writing of the romance itself could be better. Like, I can't tell which scenes were flashbacks and which the present, and the comic kept hopping from the present to the past in a very confusing way

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