it doesn't feel forced!!! y'all just want romances that struck like lightning and doesn't ...

Sorwhieu October 4, 2025 4:41 pm

it doesn't feel forced!!! y'all just want romances that struck like lightning and doesn't want a love that gently settles in. how about y'all find that kind of love in real life and see if it lasts long?

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    JayJay (I'm back!) October 4, 2025 5:42 pm

    I learned the hard way from other stories that readers simply forget events from previous chapters, to the point they forget entire prior plot points. I DO REMEMBER though, and there's been NOTHING but chemistry and development between these two, since day one. Moreover, the mc being an orphan RELATED to orphaned ML from day one, if anything was forced then it was how she tried so hard to come to understand the other two, with whom she had NOTHING in common.

    Yellena October 4, 2025 7:04 pm

    It feels kinda rushed tho.? For sera atleast. The boy probably already felt something way before. He just thought its hatred and jealousy. But for sera.? It looks like it was rushed.

    Azul October 4, 2025 7:34 pm

    I agree with the comment above. The guy, yep we understand i mean he's blushing everywhere and plus the DNA revelation? He's fallen. But for Sera? That I love you part? Uhhh no... We saw her POV, and it looked like she's not fallen to him that hard yet then boom I love you on the latest chap. It feels rushed really

    wi wi wi October 5, 2025 1:14 am

    It was out of nowhere for Sera to love him back. Yes, it was obvious he was the ml but how and when did she start to like him back?

    Yellena October 5, 2025 2:25 am
    I agree with the comment above. The guy, yep we understand i mean he's blushing everywhere and plus the DNA revelation? He's fallen. But for Sera? That I love you part? Uhhh no... We saw her POV, and it looked ... Azul

    Ikr!! Even if she had something in common with the boy for being an orphan, she looks more like she pitied him. Coz she knows how hard it is. Plus she knows how much of a pain in the bum the real sera has been.