Still like it, but now want to see the ML get his head out of his arse. The unsolicited touching almost made her fall down a cliff in this chapter, bc she unwittingly stepped backwards trying to avoid it... Dude, this is getting ridiculous. You've seen her reactions, so either pull her away from the cliff behorehand or keep your paws to yourself altogether. ...And PLEASE tone down on the casually prejudiced, over the top, condescendingly surprised constant comments: "Ooooh so, you're really not afraid of the dark?? I totally thought you would be!! (cause you - unlike my competent female subordinate, right here- definitely look like a wimpy girl who only looks pretty and never learned to wipe her own ass...)" After the 100000000000 time, it stops sounding like a (clumsy) attempt at a compliment, or even remotely funny...
Still like it, but now want to see the ML get his head out of his arse. The unsolicited touching almost made her fall down a cliff in this chapter, bc she unwittingly stepped backwards trying to avoid it...
Dude, this is getting ridiculous. You've seen her reactions, so either pull her away from the cliff behorehand or keep your paws to yourself altogether.
...And PLEASE tone down on the casually prejudiced, over the top, condescendingly surprised constant comments: "Ooooh so, you're really not afraid of the dark?? I totally thought you would be!! (cause you - unlike my competent female subordinate, right here- definitely look like a wimpy girl who only looks pretty and never learned to wipe her own ass...)" After the 100000000000 time, it stops sounding like a (clumsy) attempt at a compliment, or even remotely funny...