The world building could definitely use some work but the plot is intriguing and the romance is good for dark fantasy. I like that the story shows the ML's dilemma in wanting to covet Raza while not controlling her the same way her brother does. I like how sweet the two are with each other but my heart hurts so bad for Raza and I hope we see her getting some justice or retribution. There are certain things about the setting that confuses me but the story's main focus is the romance and defeat of the brother and I think those parts are moving at a fair pace.
The world building could definitely use some work but the plot is intriguing and the romance is good for dark fantasy. I like that the story shows the ML's dilemma in wanting to covet Raza while not controlling her the same way her brother does. I like how sweet the two are with each other but my heart hurts so bad for Raza and I hope we see her getting some justice or retribution. There are certain things about the setting that confuses me but the story's main focus is the romance and defeat of the brother and I think those parts are moving at a fair pace.