This story was alright, its not super bad or anything just weird pacing, no depth in the story besides the relationship (Which had very LITTLE depth). Just seemed like a lot of cliches smooshed together to make somewhat of a storyline to follow. I have to admit though, as I always do I found myself falling for Mr Jin more than anything (*sigh*). Honestly I have a problem, but if the author were to do something with his storyline I would NOT be opposed to it
This story was alright, its not super bad or anything just weird pacing, no depth in the story besides the relationship (Which had very LITTLE depth). Just seemed like a lot of cliches smooshed together to make somewhat of a storyline to follow. I have to admit though, as I always do I found myself falling for Mr Jin more than anything (*sigh*). Honestly I have a problem, but if the author were to do something with his storyline I would NOT be opposed to it