Just my thoughts

I think that concept was interesting, but it's sad that the MC kept getting aroused at every second that he was next to the ML. Like since they're fated pairs, it should be that in each other's presence they feel like calm or content. Like.. you know this kid is the one, but you're not moved to be like horny 24/7. Unless the concept of heat came around.. Even then, author could hv helped MC deal with it by taking proper meds. Well anyways, it could have done better in so many aspects, but when I was much younger, I was sucker for the whole fated pair concept, that I was just content with how the story is. Though rn reading it again I find it questionable, but again concept wise wasn't too bad.