Eh. I liked the idea at the beginning. Then with each chapter it had more and more plot ho...

Kirrica October 7, 2025 9:18 pm

Eh. I liked the idea at the beginning. Then with each chapter it had more and more plot holes. I don't understand the dude that communicates between Sepia and the goddess. What is he, godess' secretary??? We could've done without him and made the whole magic world of this goddess more meaningful as well as Sepia's role of ishtar star or whatever.
Why are the super-duper wolf versions in one chapter the size of a three story building, and in other the size of a horse? No one noticed a three story tall wolf killing half of eco-system at the front gate of their castle?
ML wasn't interesting. He just ran with the flow, fumbled with lack-luster plans and didn't strike me as a hero or someone who resolved anything.
Also, killing off the bad guys in such a way is so disappointing.
FL is okay i guess. For someone who suffered a lot by the hand of the white-hair guy, she stood her ground and her beliefs.
The baby resolution was a sad one, but i don't mind it. That was the most emotional this story has got.
This story has a lot going on with elements of fantasy world building, and it was just badly used/presented

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