Honestly tho, this story isn't a good one. As in the initial idea's cool but the end goal not really fitting... I think the concequences are lacking and the ML and SL should really have more to them than down bad and stupid for MC, rich, and more that archetypes. Tho, I must say, the MC has good moments and I like he stands his ground.
Honestly, if they didn't put romance too direct/that quick(?), fleshed out characters,ade it longer and more down to earth, and made the end a open ending where its ambiguous he would be forgiven (but still in good terms), it's a peak idea. 2,5 outta 5 stars :)
Honestly tho, this story isn't a good one. As in the initial idea's cool but the end goal not really fitting... I think the concequences are lacking and the ML and SL should really have more to them than down bad and stupid for MC, rich, and more that archetypes. Tho, I must say, the MC has good moments and I like he stands his ground.
Honestly, if they didn't put romance too direct/that quick(?), fleshed out characters,ade it longer and more down to earth, and made the end a open ending where its ambiguous he would be forgiven (but still in good terms), it's a peak idea. 2,5 outta 5 stars :)