on chapter 63 currently, but there are some issues i have with it that i feel like i have to address/or ask. like, eugene has brought up the topic his weak and frail body for some time now, but I'm currently seeing that he hadn’t made an effort to train at all? even he said so himself that it was an inconvenience, and that he had to train his body soon. i know that some people prefer the status quo (in Eugene's case, being weak and frail, because he has alexis to protect him) but with no effort, why even mention it at all from a writing perspective?
at the same time, i feel like there are too many instances of him being 'saved'. if the story was more focused on *his* character development, than alexis', no doubt we could’ve seen more potential with his holy power— like a holy swordsman. with that rapier, he could adapt a fast fighting technique, along with the fact that he has a light body too. he doesn’t need to be too strong, but he doesn't need to be constantly saved as well. it just makes the romance feel cheap.
not only that, it makes the plot unserious too. if eugene gets caught in a disaster, alexis would always be there to save him. and it's boring to be constantly showed that over and over again. if eugene is weak physically, but has a strong enough of a will to awaken holy power, show that he has a strong enough of a will to not get a fever/faint at every small thing. its tedious, and it's like his development stagnates.
tldr: good, satisfies my desire of reading/enjoying a fantasy reincarnation/transmigration with past memories bl, but eugene (yoojin) was terribly written, which makes the romance boring.
on chapter 63 currently, but there are some issues i have with it that i feel like i have to address/or ask. like, eugene has brought up the topic his weak and frail body for some time now, but I'm currently seeing that he hadn’t made an effort to train at all? even he said so himself that it was an inconvenience, and that he had to train his body soon. i know that some people prefer the status quo (in Eugene's case, being weak and frail, because he has alexis to protect him) but with no effort, why even mention it at all from a writing perspective?
at the same time, i feel like there are too many instances of him being 'saved'. if the story was more focused on *his* character development, than alexis', no doubt we could’ve seen more potential with his holy power— like a holy swordsman. with that rapier, he could adapt a fast fighting technique, along with the fact that he has a light body too. he doesn’t need to be too strong, but he doesn't need to be constantly saved as well. it just makes the romance feel cheap.
not only that, it makes the plot unserious too. if eugene gets caught in a disaster, alexis would always be there to save him. and it's boring to be constantly showed that over and over again. if eugene is weak physically, but has a strong enough of a will to awaken holy power, show that he has a strong enough of a will to not get a fever/faint at every small thing. its tedious, and it's like his development stagnates.
tldr: good, satisfies my desire of reading/enjoying a fantasy reincarnation/transmigration with past memories bl, but eugene (yoojin) was terribly written, which makes the romance boring.