It would be good if it was a long story, but 5 short chapters just don't make it. It's too chaotic, nothing makes sense, everything happens just because and you have to deal with it. Also, the ending was just bad, like damn maybe at least show the happy couple??? Or idk tell me more about the 17 years we just missed? Felt the same reading a fanfic written by a 12 yo on wattpad
It would be good if it was a long story, but 5 short chapters just don't make it. It's too chaotic, nothing makes sense, everything happens just because and you have to deal with it. Also, the ending was just bad, like damn maybe at least show the happy couple??? Or idk tell me more about the 17 years we just missed? Felt the same reading a fanfic written by a 12 yo on wattpad