“He never even responded to my short letter (from 2 years ago mind you) he never even showed me any sincerity so how could his love and devotion be true” and then later she says “why did he care for me so much” yeah the problem with this is the writing that makes noooo sense whatsoever realistically a woman would not ever act like this irl over a letter that she never asked him about or say no sincerity was shown then later ask why he cared for her so much. This is why it’s envoking so much anger from me whoever wrote this, REWRITE IT. Her acting shocked and crying after treating him like absolute garbage and wearing his heart around her neck oh I’m SICKKKKKKK. WHO WROTE THIS????
“He never even responded to my short letter (from 2 years ago mind you) he never even showed me any sincerity so how could his love and devotion be true” and then later she says “why did he care for me so much” yeah the problem with this is the writing that makes noooo sense whatsoever realistically a woman would not ever act like this irl over a letter that she never asked him about or say no sincerity was shown then later ask why he cared for her so much. This is why it’s envoking so much anger from me whoever wrote this, REWRITE IT. Her acting shocked and crying after treating him like absolute garbage and wearing his heart around her neck oh I’m SICKKKKKKK. WHO WROTE THIS????