The art is okay, but the colors are a bit harsh on the eyes. The psychological aspect is good, but for someone who has been drugged and kidnapped, I think it would fit the MC’s character more if he were more cautious and on guard. He was easily drugged by that pedo emcee and he easily trusted the CEO. Anyone receiving lavish gifts like that would think "Surely this isn’t for free.” Thankfully, the CEO seems to be a good person.
The ML gave mixed signals, yes, but it seems he just cared for this hardworking kid with whom he felt some affinity (since he used to watch his videos before). Still, there must also be some attraction there. After all, he was watching his videos. His character feels a bit bland, though. He’s portrayed as logical, controlling, and maybe lonely (with the cat as his pet) and he always shows up like a knight in shining armor, but overall, his personality feels flat. The CEO seems even more charming and a good fit for the MC. And I'm saying this as someone who wants MC to end up with the ML.
The MC is constantly put in situations where he needs saving. It's a little too much. It’s a writing issue that could be improved.
The blanket kiss scene should be addressed. It’s not okay to do that, even if the blanket prevents lip contact. There was no consent. It's quite scary if that happens to you irl when you're sleeping.
I think the high rating comes from how well the story portrays PTSD and the feeling of having a crush and being rejected. But for me, that rating feels a bit too generous when you look at the story as a whole. Still, I hope it improves as it goes on.
The art is okay, but the colors are a bit harsh on the eyes. The psychological aspect is good, but for someone who has been drugged and kidnapped, I think it would fit the MC’s character more if he were more cautious and on guard. He was easily drugged by that pedo emcee and he easily trusted the CEO. Anyone receiving lavish gifts like that would think "Surely this isn’t for free.” Thankfully, the CEO seems to be a good person.
The ML gave mixed signals, yes, but it seems he just cared for this hardworking kid with whom he felt some affinity (since he used to watch his videos before). Still, there must also be some attraction there. After all, he was watching his videos. His character feels a bit bland, though. He’s portrayed as logical, controlling, and maybe lonely (with the cat as his pet) and he always shows up like a knight in shining armor, but overall, his personality feels flat. The CEO seems even more charming and a good fit for the MC. And I'm saying this as someone who wants MC to end up with the ML.
The MC is constantly put in situations where he needs saving. It's a little too much. It’s a writing issue that could be improved.
The blanket kiss scene should be addressed. It’s not okay to do that, even if the blanket prevents lip contact. There was no consent. It's quite scary if that happens to you irl when you're sleeping.
I think the high rating comes from how well the story portrays PTSD and the feeling of having a crush and being rejected. But for me, that rating feels a bit too generous when you look at the story as a whole. Still, I hope it improves as it goes on.