This was just absolute dog shit. No logic, AWFUL WRITING- my beef isn’t even with the rape it’s self (like it’s awful and unnecessary,) but I’m not shitting on it just because of that, i’m not like a ‘omg there’s rape its immediately awful!!,’ because I do think that assault scenes that are done properly and treated with proper amount of seriousness and proper representation can be a plot progresser, (obviously this is not that case and this is just rape porn,) but I’m shitting on it because it’s POORLY written. Mido’s reasoning behind hating Jichan enough to turn him into an omega and endlessly rape him is weak. It would be an obvious assumption that if someone who cares about you VERY MUCH doesn’t show up when promised, then something else probably happened. Like that’s an obvious conclusion hello??? And even if it wasn’t and he had just left with no intent of ever meeting him at the station, it STILL seems like a wild exaggeration from Jichan. Also, the other blonde haired gangster wanting to see Jichan’s “endless pain and dispare” makes NO FUCKING SENSE. As far as i’m aware Jichan didn’t do anything bad to him?? And wasn’t even trying to take over the company at the end. Like sure, the “crazy sadist do it for the plot,” character works SOMETIMES, but this was a terrible execution of that. The characters behaviors have NO justification or logical reasoning behind them. Like, even besides the fact that it’s just rape porn, the plot and writing is TERRIBLE and inconsistent. Mido is an awful, uninteresting, character with poor motivations, and Jichan is a dumbass. Also, the imprinting thing was so dumb cause you’re telling me Jichan ALWAYS had bites on his neck after the scenes where Mido raped him and not one of those dozen times he was inside of him??? when ALL he did was be inside of him 24/7?? Yeah I don’t buy it. Honestly this one just high key made me pressed cause the writing is so bad, wasted three hours of my life i’ll never get back but I had to see it through till the end
This was just absolute dog shit. No logic, AWFUL WRITING- my beef isn’t even with the rape it’s self (like it’s awful and unnecessary,) but I’m not shitting on it just because of that, i’m not like a ‘omg there’s rape its immediately awful!!,’ because I do think that assault scenes that are done properly and treated with proper amount of seriousness and proper representation can be a plot progresser, (obviously this is not that case and this is just rape porn,) but I’m shitting on it because it’s POORLY written. Mido’s reasoning behind hating Jichan enough to turn him into an omega and endlessly rape him is weak. It would be an obvious assumption that if someone who cares about you VERY MUCH doesn’t show up when promised, then something else probably happened. Like that’s an obvious conclusion hello??? And even if it wasn’t and he had just left with no intent of ever meeting him at the station, it STILL seems like a wild exaggeration from Jichan. Also, the other blonde haired gangster wanting to see Jichan’s “endless pain and dispare” makes NO FUCKING SENSE. As far as i’m aware Jichan didn’t do anything bad to him?? And wasn’t even trying to take over the company at the end. Like sure, the “crazy sadist do it for the plot,” character works SOMETIMES, but this was a terrible execution of that. The characters behaviors have NO justification or logical reasoning behind them. Like, even besides the fact that it’s just rape porn, the plot and writing is TERRIBLE and inconsistent. Mido is an awful, uninteresting, character with poor motivations, and Jichan is a dumbass. Also, the imprinting thing was so dumb cause you’re telling me Jichan ALWAYS had bites on his neck after the scenes where Mido raped him and not one of those dozen times he was inside of him??? when ALL he did was be inside of him 24/7?? Yeah I don’t buy it. Honestly this one just high key made me pressed cause the writing is so bad, wasted three hours of my life i’ll never get back but I had to see it through till the end