Story is alright, could have been written differently for the start instead of the ghost seme forcefully sleeping with the bottom. Didn't really add anything to it, could have shown him yearning and looking out for him instead and for the bottom to remember by certain gestures or situations, even him just wanting to hug a lot would have been enough. Then get intimate when they both consent to it. Instead of the bottom being unaware and confused why a ghost is putting it in. Didn't give either a warm or bittersweet feeling, just neutral.
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Story is alright, could have been written differently for the start instead of the ghost seme forcefully sleeping with the bottom. Didn't really add anything to it, could have shown him yearning and looking out for him instead and for the bottom to remember by certain gestures or situations, even him just wanting to hug a lot would have been enough. Then get intimate when they both consent to it. Instead of the bottom being unaware and confused why a ghost is putting it in. Didn't give either a warm or bittersweet feeling, just neutral.