It's cute but the ending of the main story... Using fantasy to resolve things it's 'unbelievable' and rushed, especially because there weren't any fantasy elements before. Almost everything was realistic, so the whole thing in my opinion was unnecessary. If there's some Korean tale or something that explains why the need to include fantasy, the girl believing she could change the ending if she writes it, it could help. Or maybe it was a desperate attempt by an innocent, inmature but hopeful child that really thought that could help his friends
Also I hope the professor makes an appearance. Everyone thought he was a child molester so I think he needs some exploration and revindication.
And the main couple is so so so beautifully written. I miss them already.
It's cute but the ending of the main story... Using fantasy to resolve things it's 'unbelievable' and rushed, especially because there weren't any fantasy elements before. Almost everything was realistic, so the whole thing in my opinion was unnecessary. If there's some Korean tale or something that explains why the need to include fantasy, the girl believing she could change the ending if she writes it, it could help. Or maybe it was a desperate attempt by an innocent, inmature but hopeful child that really thought that could help his friends
Also I hope the professor makes an appearance. Everyone thought he was a child molester so I think he needs some exploration and revindication.
And the main couple is so so so beautifully written. I miss them already.