This is really good. Not a perfect story but great plot. - Callis x Seria = they should realize that their relationship is true and their feelings are true but the betrayal just weigh more than the love. Two truths can live simultaneously. - This Rigel x Lina something is a bit confusing (i don't mean they have relation, but their characters in later chapters are a bit confusing... It's just me) - we should have more flashback chapter of rouche x seria. Like Rouche yearning for seria. - The climax of rouche sacrifice should have more impact and feelings but it feels like its rushed But this is good. The flow is good. It's not so slow that you lose your attention to it. The chemistry between ml and fl is soooo good. I love it!
This is really good. Not a perfect story but great plot.
- Callis x Seria = they should realize that their relationship is true and their feelings are true but the betrayal just weigh more than the love. Two truths can live simultaneously.
- This Rigel x Lina something is a bit confusing (i don't mean they have relation, but their characters in later chapters are a bit confusing... It's just me)
- we should have more flashback chapter of rouche x seria. Like Rouche yearning for seria.
- The climax of rouche sacrifice should have more impact and feelings but it feels like its rushed
But this is good. The flow is good. It's not so slow that you lose your attention to it.
The chemistry between ml and fl is soooo good. I love it!