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I understand but it's a short story so…
I mean, there are many great (or at least readable) short stories out there so that's not enough reason to be this sloppy with your job. idc if there's no plot and just pwp, but even the sex scenes didn't feel great because how rushed it was. but then again, hey, who am I to judge, right?
it had potential, but the plot ain't plotting. even the smut ain't smutting. did the author run in a marathon while writing this? it's so rushed