I liked reading it, but damn... Lots of things were all over the place ^^"
Nothing truly explain the hierarchy rules in the story, one moment, AlphaxAlpha seems totally normal, the next not truly.
Lyle thoughts are all over the place and he is hard to follow. Ash is manipulative and very rapey in the sex scene, but totally a sweetheart afterwards, without discussion about any play and contract between them.
The drawings are top notch, the story, not so much.
I liked reading it, but damn... Lots of things were all over the place ^^"
Nothing truly explain the hierarchy rules in the story, one moment, AlphaxAlpha seems totally normal, the next not truly.
Lyle thoughts are all over the place and he is hard to follow. Ash is manipulative and very rapey in the sex scene, but totally a sweetheart afterwards, without discussion about any play and contract between them.
The drawings are top notch, the story, not so much.