The storyline was so good in the beginning and had alot of potential but I feel like halfway it got lost and all of sudden the seme changed too? Then towards the end he came back to the person he kinda was in the beginning? Also; they made Saha look like a dumbass in the department store chapter. Never went there? Never went on the stairs?? This would only make sense in a story where he had been shielded his entire life (by instance being in the shrine all day somewhere deserted and homeschooled) but later on we find out he went to a regular school (also to highschool) which means he did have somewhat of a regular life. And all of his personality in general was lacking: author really put him out as being a way too dumb naive person, which IN MY OPINION doesn’t pair well with the seme. Yes seme had a shitty childhood but let’s not forget everything he did have; the looks, wealth, status etc etc. In these type stories I just can’t understand what the seme ‘loves’ in the naive childlike person as someone that is or has to be superintelligent (seeing he is now a CEO) and ambitious. It always feels kinda off, and kind of manipulative.
Also; in my opinion what Saha saw was right then? Indirectly I still think Heesu killed his brother (not to say I liked the brother bc fuck that guy), but in theory he did calculate and drive him too it. I don’t think the brother would’ve actually went through with it if he only saw them doing the deed. What was the last drop was the talk with Heesu and a momentarily decision where he was already at the brink of death. Saha was sleepwalking (dont know how a sleepwalker can actually see and notice real life things that happen bc that actually devies sleepwalking I guess but okay), so he was fair I think in what he saw, bc maybe not directly but definitely with alot of manipulation Heesu did kill him. PS: wtf happened to the dad? And the mom??
The storyline was so good in the beginning and had alot of potential but I feel like halfway it got lost and all of sudden the seme changed too? Then towards the end he came back to the person he kinda was in the beginning? Also; they made Saha look like a dumbass in the department store chapter. Never went there? Never went on the stairs?? This would only make sense in a story where he had been shielded his entire life (by instance being in the shrine all day somewhere deserted and homeschooled) but later on we find out he went to a regular school (also to highschool) which means he did have somewhat of a regular life. And all of his personality in general was lacking: author really put him out as being a way too dumb naive person, which IN MY OPINION doesn’t pair well with the seme. Yes seme had a shitty childhood but let’s not forget everything he did have; the looks, wealth, status etc etc. In these type stories I just can’t understand what the seme ‘loves’ in the naive childlike person as someone that is or has to be superintelligent (seeing he is now a CEO) and ambitious. It always feels kinda off, and kind of manipulative.
Also; in my opinion what Saha saw was right then? Indirectly I still think Heesu killed his brother (not to say I liked the brother bc fuck that guy), but in theory he did calculate and drive him too it. I don’t think the brother would’ve actually went through with it if he only saw them doing the deed. What was the last drop was the talk with Heesu and a momentarily decision where he was already at the brink of death. Saha was sleepwalking (dont know how a sleepwalker can actually see and notice real life things that happen bc that actually devies sleepwalking I guess but okay), so he was fair I think in what he saw, bc maybe not directly but definitely with alot of manipulation Heesu did kill him. PS: wtf happened to the dad? And the mom??