The story telling isn't strong. The plot is pretty much linear. It has a lot of non-con and dub-con between main characters and graphic violence. Now that you know the trigger warnings, let me tell you a few things that make this story different and unique.
This story has two MLs but there isn't a love triangle at all. 1st ML is a typical stoic Daddy top and 2nd ML is a pretty top with a lethal face card.
Another thing is, unlike other obsessive MLs, the 1st ML did try to let go of MC from his shackles. It's quite refreshing to see, to be frank. And I personally like the MC amnesia storyline. He fell in love with 1st ML all over again, just like the first time before 1st ML turned abusive.
The gangster politics aren't hard to follow so don't worry about losing the romantic storyline between the characters.
Also, keep in mind that this isn't a light romantic story. It's dark, twisted and psychological.
I think, the reason people said this story dragged on unnecessarily is because, it doesn't have a weekly readability like Jinx or Mr. A's Farm. This story only makes sense when you read from start to end in one go. I don't think any event was unnecessary. It just has a week storytelling. Not every artist is a great author, you know.
When this story was ongoing, it was always on the popular list of the front page. I hope people will give it a chance. The cover is fucking misleading.
Also, about the side stories, both the threesome and pregnancy arcs are "what if" stories. They aren't canon. Only the last story about 1st ML's mother dying and MC coaching the high school kid boxer is canon. Pay attention, people.
The story telling isn't strong. The plot is pretty much linear. It has a lot of non-con and dub-con between main characters and graphic violence. Now that you know the trigger warnings, let me tell you a few things that make this story different and unique.
This story has two MLs but there isn't a love triangle at all. 1st ML is a typical stoic Daddy top and 2nd ML is a pretty top with a lethal face card.
Another thing is, unlike other obsessive MLs, the 1st ML did try to let go of MC from his shackles. It's quite refreshing to see, to be frank. And I personally like the MC amnesia storyline. He fell in love with 1st ML all over again, just like the first time before 1st ML turned abusive.
The gangster politics aren't hard to follow so don't worry about losing the romantic storyline between the characters.
Also, keep in mind that this isn't a light romantic story. It's dark, twisted and psychological.
I think, the reason people said this story dragged on unnecessarily is because, it doesn't have a weekly readability like Jinx or Mr. A's Farm. This story only makes sense when you read from start to end in one go. I don't think any event was unnecessary. It just has a week storytelling. Not every artist is a great author, you know.
When this story was ongoing, it was always on the popular list of the front page. I hope people will give it a chance. The cover is fucking misleading.
Also, about the side stories, both the threesome and pregnancy arcs are "what if" stories. They aren't canon. Only the last story about 1st ML's mother dying and MC coaching the high school kid boxer is canon. Pay attention, people.