Hmm it was good but I felt like it was lacking. I would have liked to see some more self reflection from Yoongun instead of it only being that he missed her. Like you're sorry, okay for what? I also feel like they slipped into being lovey dovey too fast, show them falling back into love first. The smut also felt stiff, they didn't illustrate movement very well. It was an interesting plot though.
Hmm it was good but I felt like it was lacking. I would have liked to see some more self reflection from Yoongun instead of it only being that he missed her. Like you're sorry, okay for what? I also feel like they slipped into being lovey dovey too fast, show them falling back into love first. The smut also felt stiff, they didn't illustrate movement very well. It was an interesting plot though.