the translation is fine but the pacing and spacing, not tryna rhyme lol, flows terribly and needs to be more evenly spaced out. Not to mention it’s not very distinguishable between characters and who’s talking, like maybe color difference or a chibi to show who’s who idk. Glad to see i’m not the only one tho
the translation is fine but the pacing and spacing, not tryna rhyme lol, flows terribly and needs to be more evenly spaced out. Not to mention it’s not very distinguishable between characters and who’s talking, like maybe color difference or a chibi to show who’s who idk. Glad to see i’m not the only one tho