confusing and long winded

j4y October 18, 2025 10:36 pm

this story isnt bad... its just super confusing. they keep introducing new characters and elements and conflict points and then dont resolve them in a conclusive way. also, leon and rio getting together at what 10 yrs old? weird. dont like it. hes a god and thinks of himself as an adult... im dropping it. it has too many plot holes.

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